Crafting Vivid Learning Stories, A Practical Example

Painting a picture with words can often feel as daunting as standing before a blank canvas with a palette full of paints. You know the potential is there - vibrant hues, striking contrasts, detailed textures - but taking the first stroke can be intimidating. As an early childhood teacher in New Zealand, writing a learning story can sometimes feel this way. It's like we're artists, trying to capture the essence of a child's experience, their learning journey in vivid detail. But where do we begin?

Imagine you're at a beach, the iconic Kiwi summer setting. Picture the warm sand under your feet, the salty breeze in your hair, the laughter of children filling the air. Now, imagine you're tasked with constructing a sandcastle. You have your tools, a bucket, a spade, maybe even a little flag to place at the top. But how do you go from a pile of sand to a magnificent castle?

Writing a learning story is similar. You have your tools - observations, knowledge of the child, understanding of the curriculum - but assembling these into a coherent and engaging narrative can feel overwhelming. But don't worry. Just like how every sandcastle begins with a single scoop of sand, every learning story begins with a simple observation.

Let's walk through an example together. As we go, we'll break down the steps, just like we would show a child how to build a sandcastle, one scoop at a time.


It was a sunny Tuesday morning, and our tamariki were engrossed in their play. I noticed Harper, our quiet thinker, by the painting easel. She was staring at the blank sheet, paintbrush in hand. I could almost see the gears turning in her head.

Her small hand moved towards the palette, fingers curling around a glob of red paint. With a determined look in her eyes, she brought the paintbrush to the paper. A single stroke of red paint marked the beginning of her masterpiece.

I watched as she carefully added more colours - blue, yellow, green. Her brow furrowed in concentration, every stroke deliberate and meaningful. She was creating her world, one colour at a time.

When she finally put her paintbrush down, she stood back and admired her work. A broad grin spread across her face, her eyes sparkling with pride. She looked at me and said, "Look, Miss, I made a rainbow!"

Indeed, there on the paper was a rainbow, vibrant and colourful, a testament to Harper's creativity and determination.

What an incredible learning moment! Harper had not only explored colours and expressed her creativity but also demonstrated perseverance and pride in her achievement.


Let's break down this learning story.

The story begins with setting the scene. Just like how you would lay the groundwork for your sandcastle, it's important to set the context for your learning story. In this case, it was a normal day in the classroom, and Harper was by the painting easel.

The next part involved observing Harper's actions. Her choice of paint, her focused expression, her deliberate strokes. All these details are like the building blocks of your sandcastle, each one adding depth and dimension to the story.

The climax of the story was Harper's triumphant declaration of her achievement. This is the flag at the top of your sandcastle, the highlight of your story. It showed Harper's learning outcome - her understanding of colours, creativity, and sense of accomplishment.

Lastly, the learning story was rounded off with a reflection on Harper's learning. This is like stepping back and admiring your sandcastle, understanding what it represents. In Harper's case, it was a celebration of her creativity, perseverance, and pride.

Writing a learning story, like building a sandcastle, can be a fulfilling and enjoyable process. It's about capturing the child's learning journey, one observation at a time, and shaping it into a narrative that reflects their unique experiences.

Remember, there's no 'one size fits all' approach to writing learning stories. Each child is unique, and so is their learning journey. So, the next time you find yourself standing before a 'blank canvas', take a deep breath, pick up your 'paintbrush', and start painting your learning story, one stroke at a time.